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Animation3, Critiques writeup3 Sluga
Sit to Stand The Ik to Fk is very noticeable. Hand slide off of knee as if it has no friction. More over lap, and follow through of the back will help enhance the animation by giving the animation a … Continue reading
Critique writeup 2 Stocch
http://stocchv.wordpress.com/2014/09/03/3-bouncing-balls/ Ball1: stops too quickly. It needs more squash and stretch. Ball2: had a strange motion in the air before reaching the floor.The ball slides art the end. Ball3: No sign of squash and stretch. Nice arc as it falls. … Continue reading