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Animation3, Critiques writeup3 Sluga
Sit to Stand The Ik to Fk is very noticeable. Hand slide off of knee as if it has no friction. More over lap, and follow through of the back will help enhance the animation by giving the animation a … Continue reading
Critique writeup 2 Stocch
http://stocchv.wordpress.com/2014/09/03/3-bouncing-balls/ Ball1: stops too quickly. It needs more squash and stretch. Ball2: had a strange motion in the air before reaching the floor.The ball slides art the end. Ball3: No sign of squash and stretch. Nice arc as it falls. … Continue reading
Critique Classmate Dicaro
http://dicarojj.wordpress.com/2014/12/06/heavy-lift/ Very smooth arches. Excellent timing. All parts of the body overlap and follow through which gives the character a cartoony, but believable movements. Maybe modeling the background will enhance the story. Needs to animated the fingers, and arm at … Continue reading
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Animation3, Lift
Too floaty. When moving back, legs move too slow when it should be speeding up due to the force of gravity and box. Hands need to animate when she is looking left and right. Animate more to finish the story.
Animation3, Pace
Walks too robotically. Hand tend to jerk, when moving forward. Turn is too quick. Need pause or a longer period of time is need when norman’s stomach is up set. Knee is piping and jumpy. He move like he is … Continue reading
Animation3, Walk cycle
Not enough overlap and follow through.Every part of normans body seems to try to move at the same time. Knees seem to pop often. Body move too robotically.He appears to be stoping on the floor instead of walking. Arms seem … Continue reading
Animation3, Ball Project
HeavyBall: Falls a little bit too fast. Y axis of the ball need to have a smoother tangent. Beach Ball: Needs to slow down more gradually.In the last few frames, it looks like it is hitting a invisible wall. Light … Continue reading
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