The Ik to Fk is very noticeable. Hand slide off of knee as if it has no friction. More over lap, and follow through of the back will help enhance the animation by giving the animation a more believable movement.
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Ball1: stops too quickly. It needs more squash and stretch.
Ball2: had a strange motion in the air before reaching the floor.The ball slides art the end.
Ball3: No sign of squash and stretch. Nice arc as it falls. Slides at the end
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Very smooth arches. Excellent timing. All parts of the body overlap and follow through which gives the character a cartoony, but believable movements. Maybe modeling the background will enhance the story. Needs to animated the fingers, and arm at the end of his animation.
Too floaty. When moving back, legs move too slow when it should be speeding up due to the force of gravity and box. Hands need to animate when she is looking left and right. Animate more to finish the story.
Walks too robotically. Hand tend to jerk, when moving forward. Turn is too quick. Need pause or a longer period of time is need when norman’s stomach is up set. Knee is piping and jumpy. He move like he is still in linear mode. Needs smoother arches in movement.
Not enough overlap and follow through.Every part of normans body seems to try to move at the same time. Knees seem to pop often. Body move too robotically.He appears to be stoping on the floor instead of walking. Arms seem to snap as his arms move foward.
HeavyBall:
Falls a little bit too fast. Y axis of the ball need to have a smoother tangent.
Beach Ball: Needs to slow down more gradually.In the last few frames, it looks like it is hitting a invisible wall.
Light ball: Ball bounce need to lose altitude slightly slower. Ball bounces too much at the end.
My character’s name is Green. She is a survivor the the plant men that seek revenge on metal men who destroyed her home land and her people. They destroyed their habitat and turn them into futuristic cities. In order to seek her revenge, she has to travel around the world destroying the cities that conquer tribes around the world as wells reciting more allies to help aid her.
In this wood carving project, we learned how to become committed to a plan or designed plan. I made a human leaf women for my design. The class spend a week at the green house looks for a design for the wood carving. At first when I was carving, I wanted to change my idea, but didn’t because changing the design means giving up on goals. If we can’t create what we desire, what is the point of designing.
The lines that are created the illusion of the hair twisting around the women are the vines which represent her hair. The concept is nature is raped all around us. No matter how crazy our ideas or hoes original our characters are, every thing comes from nature.
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