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Game Level
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/hczbzdqdhi9r3es/AACLMbEL-UO8EtPErlzh1-3Na?dl=0 This about a child that went to the afterlife and finding who he was before crossing worlds.
Animation3, Critiques writeup3 Sluga
Sit to Stand The Ik to Fk is very noticeable. Hand slide off of knee as if it has no friction. More over lap, and follow through of the back will help enhance the animation by giving the animation a … Continue reading
Critique writeup 2 Stocch
http://stocchv.wordpress.com/2014/09/03/3-bouncing-balls/ Ball1: stops too quickly. It needs more squash and stretch. Ball2: had a strange motion in the air before reaching the floor.The ball slides art the end. Ball3: No sign of squash and stretch. Nice arc as it falls. … Continue reading
Critique Classmate Dicaro
http://dicarojj.wordpress.com/2014/12/06/heavy-lift/ Very smooth arches. Excellent timing. All parts of the body overlap and follow through which gives the character a cartoony, but believable movements. Maybe modeling the background will enhance the story. Needs to animated the fingers, and arm at … Continue reading
Sketch Book
Atherley_Corey_Animation3_Sketchbook copy
Animation3, Lift
Too floaty. When moving back, legs move too slow when it should be speeding up due to the force of gravity and box. Hands need to animate when she is looking left and right. Animate more to finish the story.
Corey Atherley 